Essay 2 Final Draft

In the recent years recruiters in the military have been struggling to meet their goals and are having a hard time finding new people to join their ranks. In 2018 the service had a “recruiting reckoning” when the Army fell short of its goal by more than 6,000 new soldiers (Myers). They had to try new recruiting techniques to appeal more to the Generation Z high schoolers, they started going on more social media platforms and it was a game changer in military recruiting. Although social media helped in some ways there was still the challenge of connecting with people in certain parts of country that would be considered “the ghetto” or more poverty stricken.

            In the article “The Recruiters- Searching for The Next Generation of Warfighters in A Divided America” by Adam Linehan, he talks about the time he spent with the recruiters of the Mid Atlantic Recruiting Battalion in East Orange, New Jersey. There is roughly 80,000 people that reside in the area covered by the recruiting mission but most of them don’t meet enlistment standards due to tattoos on the hands, face, and neck, physical and mental-health issues, or have some type of criminal record, or don’t have a high diploma or GED. Only about 29% of the people in America between the ages 17-24 are eligible to serve Linehan stated. The recruiters used social media platforms in attempt to reach out to the younger generation but they needed more effective ways to engage with the community. They started going out to local and school sport events, block parties, the mayor’s office, going to parks, bus stops, Linehan said even one recruited told him that he would play Pokémon Go to engage with the community in an informal type of setting. He then talks about how the most important factor was the health of the economy, the higher the rate of unemployment the more people became interested in joining the military; Linehan states “the more economically stressed, socioeconomic classes tend to be underrepresented in the armed forces. Although people in low-income neighborhoods are generally more inclined than their wealthier compatriots to enlist”.

            Linehan then talks about how a recruiter, let’s say in North Carolina doesn’t have to work nearly as hard to get people to come in as a recruiter in New Jersey would, this is because the northeast has become “disconnected from the military” said Lt. Col. Edward Croot, the once Commanding Officer of the recruiting battalion, so they wanted to figure out how to get more people to become more interested in joining the military. They didn’t use unethical recruiting practices like lying or telling half-truths, covering up information, or helping recruits cheat on entrance tests. They found that if they were honest and made an impact on the community and helped people, that they would be more trusting of them and not just view them as the recruiters who are trying to take members of their community and just send them off to war but realized that they were there to help. Linehan talked with Staff Sgt. Herenson Duvelasint, who came from Haiti to East Orange New Jersey with his mom when he was 8. He talks about how Duvelsaint is the best recruiter in East Orange getting almost twice as many people to join compared to the other recruiters. Me personally he doesn’t say it in the article but I think that has to do with how members of the community can understand and relate with his childhood growing up in the same town he is recruiting in.

            Linehan then talks about how “Essex County, which is home to roughly 800,000 people condensed into 22 tightly clustered municipalities, has the most extreme income disparity in New Jersey (and it’s growing). And the physical boundaries between rich and poor hew closely to the ones between black and white. Driving west from Newark, through places like Maplewood, South Orange, and Montclair, median household incomes leap by more than $70,000 in a matter of just a few miles and continue to climb as the neighborhoods become whiter. East Orange and neighboring Irvington, which together account for the majority of recruits inducted through Haddock’s center, are more than 85% black. The percentage hovers around 1% in North Caldwell, the county’s richest borough.” He ends the article talks with Staff Nasteshia Robinson, a female recruiter who told him who she wants to help the people in the area get out of poverty and escape abuse. She talks about how other the recruiters joke about how East Orange is a “war zone” and she say that “This is America. They are Americans.” And I took that as she thinks that the people in community regardless of race or social class should be treated with equally.

               Being in the military myself I have definitely seen some of the things talked about in Linehan’s article as far as unethical recruiting practices, many service members are told many false hopes about the military, many are promised bounces but aren’t told the “fine print” like they have to complete and pass all these different courses in order to get the money and if they don’t pass, they don’t get what they were originally told but instead just given another job and it is only after signing the dotted line that they find out. As far as the topic of diversity regarding race or social class I have to say, the military is definitely doing a better job with that. I served with members of all races; white, black, latino, Asian, even served with people who have got their citizenship by joining the military. If I’m being honest most of the people I served with, I’d say probably about 70-75% came from similar backgrounds as my self and didn’t have a lot of money growing up regardless of race. I was in the Marine Corp though I couldn’t speak on the ranks of the Army but in his article on Starts and Stripes, Corey Dickstein Talks about how the Army ranks; but in his article on Stars and Stripes Cory Dickstein states the Army has seen improvements in diversity in people joining the army with 47% of the 62,150 recruits the Army shipped to basic training being non-white, an improvement from recent years. Although the Army meet their goal for 2020 although it was much smaller compared to the year before but for 2021 the Army has increased its target number of new recruits in infantry career fields by rough 3,500; they are even offering contract incentives up to $25,000(Rempfer). Once covid hit recruiting virtual online became one of only options being that everything was shut down.; it’ll be interesting to see how the Covid pandemic will affect the recruiting process over these next couple of months maybe even years.

Work Cited

            Dickstein, Corey. “Army hits 2020 recruiting, retention goals amid pandemic, but top officials say more diversity needed”. Stars and Stripes.com, 9 October 2020, https://www.stripes.com/news/us/army-hits-2020-recruiting-retention-goals-amid-pandemic-but-top-officials-say-more-diversity-needed-1.648068

            Linehan, Adam. “The Recruiters: Searching for The Next Generation of Warfighters in A Divided America”. Task&Purpose.com, 28 November 2017, https://taskandpurpose.com/community/east-orange-army-recruitment-divided-america/?src=longreads

                Myers, Meghann. “Services met recruiting goals as COVID forced military to modernize, SECDEF say”. Military Times, 15 October 2020, https://www.militarytimes.com/news/your-military/2020/10/15/services-met-recruiting-goals-as-covid-forced-military-to-modernize-secdef-says/

                Rempfer, Kyle. “Army seeks about 3,500 more infantry recruits this year”. Army Times, 29 October 2020, https://www.armytimes.com/news/your-army/2020/10/29/army-seeks-about-3500-more-infantry-recruits-this-year/

Brain storming for essay3

The military is not only facing issues with find new people to join but they also have issues with people wanting to stay in as well. I have first hand experience with this myself and have talked to many people who have gotten out after their first enlistment. People don’t want top stay in because the military just is not what they expected it to. Yeah, I got to travel and serve with people who will be friends for life but there so much micromanaging, unfit living conditions and other nonsense that people just don’t want to deal with. Another issue the military faces. Another issue the military faces, they now are losing more service members to suicide than to war since the withdrawal of troops in the middle east; roughly 22 veterans/service members kill themselves every day. The military also faces issues with child care with members and spouses finding it hard to find affordable and quality child care. Another issue that the military is faces it the recent event that have be taking place at Fort Hood with soldiers being sexual abused and even murdered by fellow service members.

Photos can be used to show some of barrack rooms that military member are living in where there is mold. Photos of charts can used to show the number of deaths of suicides compared to recent year and also vs the number of kia in battle.

Sources

https://www.militarytimes.com/news/your-military/2020/04/28/soldiers-and-marines-die-by-suicide-50-percent-more-often-than-sailors-and-airmen-report-finds/

https://www.militarytimes.com/news/pentagon-congress/2019/02/08/the-militarys-lingering-readiness-problem-lack-of-daycare/

https://www.stripes.com/news/army/why-is-fort-hood-the-army-s-most-crime-ridden-post-1.642104

essay2 peer review

I was paired up with Billy and I think he has a great starting piece, but I think the opening paragraph could be adjusted; maybe first talking about the important of endangered species then go into specific species because I thought it was about honey bees when I first started reading it. I think he did a good job a summarizing his article but I would focus more on what the author did talk about and save what didn’t for the response part of the essay. I think he did a good job at using his sources and pulling information from them for his writing. He has a good starting piece and with a little adjustment and more outline on the main idea in the opening paragraph it will great essay.  

possible sources for essay2

Source1

Myers, Meghann. “Services met recruiting goals as COVID forced military to modernize, SECDEF say”. Military Times, 15 October 2020, https://www.militarytimes.com/news/your-military/2020/10/15/services-met-recruiting-goals-as-covid-forced-military-to-modernize-secdef-says/

I found this source helpful in starting my introduction; I came up with my opening sentence while reading this article. It is a short one but it gave me just the right details I needed to start my introduction.

Source2

Rempfer, Kyle. “Army seeks about 3,500 more infantry recruits this year”. Army Times, 29 October 2020, https://www.armytimes.com/news/your-army/2020/10/29/army-seeks-about-3500-more-infantry-recruits-this-year/

This source was interesting because in the Marine Corp there is not a lot of contract bonuses for infantry recruits entering the service only afterwards on their second contract but I also heard about how the Army does it. I didn’t know it was that much, that’s something that more researched should be done on, but I know that not all of people signing those bonuses will get them.

Source3

Dickstein, Corey. “Army hits 2020 recruiting, retention goals amid pandemic, but top officials say more diversity needed”. Stars and Stripes.com, 9 October 2020, https://www.stripes.com/news/us/army-hits-2020-recruiting-retention-goals-amid-pandemic-but-top-officials-say-more-diversity-needed-1.648068

This was a good source to see how the Army is trying to bring more diversity into its ranks so that its future leader can be set up for success.

Essay2 rough draft

Peer review note: This is my first time putting more than one piece of writing together so I know it needs some work and maybe could use another paragraph or two to help with transitioning and pointing out the main idea of the essay. I am looking forward to hearing your feedback.

In the recent years recruiters in the military have been struggling to meet their goals and are having a hard time finding new people to join their ranks. In 2018 the service had a “recruiting reckoning” when the Army fell short of its goal by more than 6,000 new soldiers. They had to try new recruiting techniques to appeal more to the Generation Z high schoolers, they started going on more social media platforms and it was a game changer in military recruiting. Once COVID hit recruiting virtual online became one of only options being that everything was shut down. The Army meet their goal for 2020 although it was much smaller compared to the year before but for 2021 the Army has increased its target number of new recruits in infantry career fields by rough 3,500; they are even offering contract incentives up to $25,000. The Army is also hopping to see more women and minorities enlist this year in 2021.

            I read “The Recruiters- Searching for The Next Generation of Warfighters in A Divided America” by Adam Linehan where he observed the way the recruiters with the Mid Atlantic Recruiting Battalion in East Orange, New Jersey. There is roughly 80,000 people that reside in the area covered by the recruiting mission but most of them don’t meet enlistment standards due to tattoos on the hands, face, and neck, physical and mental-health issues, or have some type of criminal record. Only about 29% of the people in the area between the ages 17-24 were eligible to serve. They were also in the hardest place to recruit in America. A recruiter, let’s say in North Carolina doesn’t have to work nearly as hard to get people to come in as a recruiter in New Jersey would, this is because the northeast has become “disconnected from the military” said Lt. Col. Edward Croot, the once Commanding Officer of the recruiting battalion. So, they wanted to figure out how to get more people to become more interested in joining the military. The most important factor was the health of the economy, the higher the rate of unemployment the more people became interested in joining the military. The recruiters used social media platforms in attempt to reach out to the younger generation but they found that it was more effective to engage with the community. They started going out to local and school sport events, block parties, the mayor’s office, going to parks, bus stops and one recruited even said he would play Pokémon Go to engage with the community in an informal type of setting. They didn’t use unethical recruiting practices like lying or telling half-truths, covering up information, or helping recruits cheat on entrance tests. They found that if they were honest and made an impact on the community and helped people, that they would be more trusting of them and not just view them as the recruits who are trying to take members of their community and just send them off to war but realized that they were there to help.

            Being in the military myself I have definitely seen some of the things talked about in the article as far as unethical recruiting practices, many service members are told many false hopes about the military, many are promised bounces but aren’t told the “fine print” like they have to complete and pass all these different courses in order to get the money and if they don’t pass, they don’t get what they were originally told but instead just given another job and it is only after signing the dotted line that they find out. I wasn’t in the army so many of the stats I cannot vouch like how most of the recruiters were prior special forces I have no doubt they probably the better recruiters because of all their training but that’s something I myself would maybe want to look up because to me based off what I seen most special forces guys stay special forces till they get out but again I was in the Marine Corp not the army.   

response to article

Being in the military myself I have definitely seen some of the things talked about in the article as far as unethical recruiting practices, many service members are told many false hopes about the military, many are promised bounces but aren’t told the “fine print” like they have to complete and pass all these different courses in order to get the money and if they don’t pass, they don’t get what they were originally told but instead just given another job and it is only after signing the dotted line that they find out. I wasn’t in the army so many of the stats I can not vouch like how most of the recruiters were prior special forces I have no doubt they probably the better recruiters because of all their training but that’s something I myself would maybe want to look up because to me based off what I seen most special forces guys stay special forces till they get out but again I was in the Marine Corp not the army.    

Summary of The Recruiters

I read “The Recruiters- Searching for The Next Generation of Warfighters in A Divided America” by Adam Linehan where he observed the way the recruiters with the Mid Atlantic Recruiting Battalion in East Orange, New Jersey. There is roughly 80,000 people that reside in the area covered by the recruiting mission but most of them don’t meet enlistment standards due to tattoos on the hands, face, and neck, physical and mental-health issues, or have some type of criminal record. Only about 29% of the people in the area between the ages 17-24 were eligible to serve. They were also in the hardest place to recruit in America. A recruiter, let’s say in North Carolina doesn’t have to work nearly as hard to get people to come in as a recruiter in New Jersey would, this is because the northeast has become “disconnected from the military” said Lt. Col. Edward Croot, the once Commanding Officer of the recruiting battalion. So, they wanted to figure out how to get more people to become more interested in joining the military. The most important factor was the health of the economy, the higher the rate of unemployment the more people became interested in joining the military. The recruiters used social media platforms in attempt to reach out to the younger generation but they found that it was more effective to engage with the community. They started going out to local and school sport events, block parties, the mayor’s office, going to parks, bus stops and one recruited even said he would play Pokémon Go to engage with the community in an informal type of setting. They didn’t use unethical recruiting practices like lying or telling half-truths, covering up information, or helping recruits cheat on entrance tests. They found that if they were honest and made an impact on the community and helped people, that they would be more trusting of them and not just view them as the recruits who are trying to take members of their community and just send them off to war but realized that they were there to help.